Bahasa Inggris Bisnis (Tugas 3)

Statement3:
a foreign visitor has only one day to spend in your country
where should this visitor go run that day?
user specific reason and example to support your choice

My Opinion:
If I would advise foreigners to go to Jakarta and surrounding areas. Since Jakarta is the capital city of a country that is very much populated. It is no stranger to the city in the ears of strangers. Many foreigners that I saw live in Jakarta. I'll take them to the National Monument, Old Town, Taman Ismail Marzuki, the Heroes Cemetery, Taman Mini Indonesia Indah and many more places that symbolize the city of Jakarta is.
Jakarta is the center of government, foreigners who came certainly amazed by the attitudes of Indonesian people are warm-hearted and friendly. In Jakarta, there are also many large malls such as Grand Indonesia, Mall Tama Anggrek, Pondok Indah Mall and many others.
Jakarta famous jams and congested. Foreigners who come here seem to already know how things are going here in Jakarta. But I am sure there are many foreigners who want to come to Indonesia, especially Jakarta beloved.